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Review: MOCKINGJAY Proves THE HUNGER GAMES is a Series of Diminishing Returns

Posted on 10 September 2010 by Brent Hartinger, Editor

Individual Book Ratings:

The Hunger Games:

Five Torches (Out of Five)

Catching Fire:

Four Torches (Out of Five)

MockingJay:

One and a Half Torches (Out of Five)

I’m wracking my brain: I don’t think I’ve ever been so disappointed by the third book in a trilogy as I was by MockingJay, the third book in Suzanne Collin’s The Hunger Games trilogy of teen sci-fi books.

It’s one of those works that’s so disappointing — that’s such a clunky hollow shell of a book — that is has me questioning my love for other books by the same author. Am I misremembering how good the first two books were? Did I somehow misinterpret them at the time?

But no, The Hunger Games is still a terrific page-turner, one of the best in the now-popular genre of dystopian teen fiction.

The idea itself was nothing fresh — in a post-apocalyptic world, a totalitarian government keeps control by forcing various “districts” to send 24 of their teenagers to a “fight to the death” in a venue full of dangers that itself changes annually.

Catching Fire, the second book, was, frankly, a bit of disappointment, because rather than extend the story to some interesting, new place, Collins mostly just repeated the plot of the first book — oh, no, she has to go back to the Hunger Games a second time! Still, the characterizations were a little richer and the stakes a little higher. And the “games” themselves were mostly pretty different, and the book had the same zippy pacing, and a nicely thrilling plot (even if Katniss, the main character, was less central to the action this time around).

But MockingJay? It’s one of those books where literally everything successful about it is simply recycled material from the first two books — recycled in a mostly boring way, unfortunately.

I remember when Collins first presented us with the whole concept of the MockingJay in The Hunger Games: the jabberjays (a species genetically created by the Capitol to be spies and record conversations, but ultimately used against then) bred with mockingbirds, creating something new and different: a hybrid species.

My first thought was, “Oh, that is enormously clever! And I bet it’s going to end up being integral to the plot is some cool, unexpected way.”

But no, it just ends up being a ham-fisted metaphor for Katniss, emphasized over and over again.

MockingJay is a book of completely missed opportunities.

After her two experiences in the games, Katniss is now experiencing a serious case of post-traumatic stress disorder. She’s overcome by anger and resentment — so much so that she’s basically paralyzed by emotion.

On paper, I’m sure this sounded like a good idea — and I do like the idea of showing us the consequences of actually going into the games. But Katniss is so dour and negative and whiny — and, most of all, passive — that it eventually becomes almost impossible to identify with her, or even like her.

Meanwhile, the all-important “love triangle” at the center of the earlier books — Katniss, Peeta, and Gale — comes to a screeching halt and is hardly developed at all. Weirdly, Peeta and Gale barely appear — and Peeta is even more changed by his experiences than Katniss (for reasons that are soon explained).

Two of the other most interesting and indelible characters from the first two books, Haymatch and Cinna, also show up, but they barely register — it seems like they’re making cameo appearances. Why show us these beloved characters at all if they’re so carelessly squandered?

Most of the book seems to consist of Katniss … sitting around waiting (the main “story” literally doesn’t begin until well over halfway through). Katniss seethes and stews a lot too. She’s never been the most active character — except, of course, when she absolutely needs to be, like volunteering to take Prim’s place in the games, or when she’s in the middle of the games themselves.

But in past books, her passiveness make her the typical “reluctant” hero, someone you could root for and identify with. Here she seems almost psychotic. What’s the opposite of plucky? Sure, her reaction is understandable, but it’s not very pleasant to read.

And in a perfect example of how hard it is to overlook flaws and inconsistencies when you’re not otherwise enjoying a book, I kept being frustrated by how the Capitol, which seemed to have virtually unlimited technological power in the first two books, now seemed so impotent and easily defeated. District 13 can simply tap into the TV feeds — forever? The Capitol, which had built that incredibly sophisticated surveillance system, is now so easily penetrated?

And the supposedly searing “concluding twist” involving a certain leader? To me, it seemed completely tacked on to provide some kind of drama, and it was way too heavily foreshadowed anyway.

In preparation for this review, I was curious to see what other outlets have had to say about the book. I was surprised to see that MockingJay is getting mixed to positive reviews by other mainstream outlets. Partly, this doesn’t surprise me too much: in the era of Twilight, and the implosion of “traditional” media and the whole publishing industry, the pressure not to pan a break-out bestseller must be enormous, especially one that’s wildly popular with the kind of teen readers that could just possibly save both traditional media and the publishing industry.

But it does have me wondering: what do other readers really think? Many of the reader-reviews on Amazon are scathing (appropriately, IMHO).

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10 Responses to “Review: MOCKINGJAY Proves THE HUNGER GAMES is a Series of Diminishing Returns”

  1. awry says:

    Disappointed.. total disappointment. I felt kind of cheated after finishing the last book, because after the second I thought the third was gonna redeem the series. But the 3rd book just leaves the series rather empty and hollow.. oh well.. haha.. The 1st book is the best, definitely, it hits all the right notes, the story and emotional connection with the reader are raw and concise. I guess her problem would be that she loses focus with the 2nd and 3rd books, emphasising on all the wrong things and skimming past all the right ones. Poor momentum. IMHO, the killing of prim is totally unnecessary and excessive too, because I’ve always felt that prim is the very thing that defines katniss and the story/spirit of this series, so destroying it really weakens the story and the characters. She never should have dragged the book on to a trilogy. Probably would have been better if she ends it within the 2nd book. Oh, and also, I think the only part I enjoyed in this book was when I got to see peeta act like a total jerk haha! Hmm.. love the 1st though.. I think I’m gonna reread battle royale now haha

  2. Patrick says:

    I don’t understand why people get mad at Katniss for hiding in a closet and whatever else she does int he book. Up to this point in the series, Katniss has been stuck doing whatever someone else tells her to do. She’s an independent sort of person, that’s been clear since book 1. She deserves to make her own decisions for once. And believe me, I have no doubt that each one of us would have a serious case of PTSD if we had to go through even once what she had to go through twice. I mean look at Haymitch, one hunger games but him out of it for the rest of his life. We should say that she handles it quite well actually.
    I think that what Suzanne Collins did shows incredible maturity as a writer. The whole series is as much about Katniss’ internal struggle as it is about the overthrowing of the Capital, it just takes a bigger part in this book then in the previous two.

  3. Ella says:

    I really loved Mockingjay, I thought it was better than Catching Fire for sure.

  4. Kevin says:

    I didn’t hate the book, but was very disappointed. She didn’t use her other characters well, perhaps because the book is in first person, which is a hard tense to do well. But still, she had a cast of characters that were just starting to be well developed, then nothing. That said, I still liked Katniss, and understood why she behaved the way she did. I think the book would have been better served written in third person.

  5. April says:

    Mostly I just want to know what Collins was thinking. Did she not have a plan for the third book? Was it never supposed to be a trilogy, and they made her do it at the last minute after they bought the first book? Why did no one tell her that a book requires, well, a plot.

  6. Alan says:

    Intrigued by this theory that review outlets “pull their punches” when it comes to books like this. Do you really think they do this?

    • I don’t think it’s conscious, but I kinda think they do. I think most traditional publications are so freaked out by what’s happening, and I think everyone who works for them knows: don’t alienate the few readers we have left! They start out by assigning a total fan to the review (which is not necessarily a bad thing — it’s stupid to have people review a genre or author if they’re not something of a fan). But the subtle message is: please like this book.

      I also think anyone who works in publishing, even as a reviewer, is also completely freaked out by what’s going on, how the industry is basically imploding. So when they see a book that’s OBVIOUSLY going to be big, they want to “support” it (again, at least subconsciously).

      I think the same thing happened with Dan Brown’s last book, The Lost Symbol. Very few mainstream outlets said what was screamingly obvious to most readers: this emperor was stark naked. But I think the reason they DIDN’T say it is because they’d been wrong with The Da Vinci Code, which they mostly hated while readers mostly loved it, and they didn’t want egg on their faces again. Ditto for the Twilight books…

      I dunno, just a theory…

  7. MAGPIE says:

    Not quite sure if I hated it this much, but yeah, hated it.

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